Ah, that's it. I have no objection to porn, per se, but unless a sex scene involves the characters being, well, as in character as they can be, it gets dull. It could be anybody. Even in my regular, published fiction, I don't do sex scenes very often - only if such a scene will reveal something about the characters or their relationship. In those circs, porn that does not serve the plot is dull.
There's some very sexy porn out there, but I don't think I can write it. I'm really glad you liked Love Potions though!
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There's some very sexy porn out there, but I don't think I can write it. I'm really glad you liked Love Potions though!