Most of the best fic writers I know use present tense fairly often, and effectively. Including you. Go with what works, as others here have said. The people who object...well. I just got a comment (the first) on a fic on AO3 informing me that I need to change my OUAT disclaimer, because fairytales have no copyright. Yeah. Go with what works - you do that beautifully.
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Date: 2012-06-09 07:41 pm (UTC)John!whump!! More, please ♥