I absolutely love this! I can just imagine John going back and rereading all the texts from this # in a new light. The banter is well done and amusing. The mix of texts to exposition is well balanced. You have ended it on a perfect note. (Although I'm greedy and would love to see a sequel because I just don't want it to end!)
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branchandroot
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Date: 2012-07-03 11:47 pm (UTC)