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[impulsereader]

Would someone please Britishize this for me? I don't think the imagery is right for John.

Simon was so angry that he very inadvisably dropped his (bloody gorgeous antique [the complete and utter tosser]) rifle in a fit of temper, then began to screech and hop around like a jackrabbit in heat. John didn’t even register the report of the gun going off until after he’d begun this bizarre and fascinating behaviour.

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[northernwalker]

Well, I can't Britpick the whole piece, but jackrabbits are New World, not Old World.

[impulsereader.livejournal.com]

Yes, definitely too american. *frowns*

[northernwalker]

Maybe a crazed kangaroo?

[impulsereader.livejournal.com]

I need something which conjures a seriously cartoonish visual - but in a very british way. this is possibly just not possible.

[mizz-history.livejournal.com]

I and others I know use the phrase 'mad as a box of frogs'...

[impulsereader.livejournal.com]

That is a pretty good visual. My first reaction is to add - with a lid on it - dunno why - is it funnier if the frogs are bouncing around the box (off the walls) because they have no way of getting out?

[mizz-history.livejournal.com]

I've always imagined that there's a lid on said box... ;oP

[impulsereader.livejournal.com]

Your input on both fronts is gratefully received. Thank you!

[mizz-history.livejournal.com]

No problem :o)